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Posted by Tina on July 20, 2015 at 9:25 AM

3. If your mother promised to be home at 2:00 in the afternoon to take you to the movies but didn’t show up until suppertime and didn’t even phone, what would be a good punishment for her? Would punishing her be likely to make her be on time in the future?


I think I can’t punish my mom. But I think I can say something that like; “Why are you so late? I can’t see movie!!!”. But when I punish my mom, than my mom will punish me. Because every parents do not like one’s child is punishing parents. But when I punish my mom, than I will ask more thing than just seeing movie. Because she didn’t keep the promise that she will come until 2:00 in the afternoon, and she didn’t make me to see movie! But I think punishing is not good way to say something to mom. Because my mom can feel dirty, so she doesn’t want to do anything to me. And when I need to be punished, than she will punish me stricter than now. Also, my mom will have some sorry feeling to me, so she will say sorry. So I think we don’t need to punish my mom.

Second, there is not that much good way to punish my mom. Because I can’t punch my mom, I can’t kick my mom! The only way that I can punish my mom is with talking. Because when I punch or kick my mom, than my mom will give me disaster synthesize set. Also my father will be so angry, and I can’t do anything because of small punish to my mom.


So in conclusion, I think punishing my mom is not good way.



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Reply Ian's mom
9:26 PM on July 20, 2015 
Hi Tina

There is a difference between "then" and "than". Can you tell their differences?

Either "a" movie or "the" movie.

Try to read through what you had written and see if there needs to be any "the"s or "a"s attached before nouns. This is especially difficult for Koreans as we are not used to these kind of words but let's give a try.

my mom can feel "irritated" or "bad" but not "dirty"

Good job in trying to pull your thoughts together.